Youll Never Walk
What do You Think of my love poem?
"WITH YOU IN MIND"
by: John Paul Bernal
With his two loving hands he molded me to life
Every part of my existence made with you in mind
A body strong enough to protect you thru the dangers youll walk
The heart to light up your day when your world turns to dark
A mind to always Guide your destiny safely
Eyes to always remind you of your wonderful beauty
Ears to hear when your heart cries for help
A nose to smell danger before you can tell
The lips to assure you that youll always belong
The mouth to say That You can never go wrong
Hands to catch you whenever you stumble
Fingers to cause your body to tremble
Arms to hold you when you want to feel safe
The legs to stand strong by you every God given day
My feet to leave footprints so that youll never forget
that i was already yours before our hearts met
Copyright ©2008 John Paul Bernal
I would like to say that this is my poem i wrote it a while back and i really appreciate everyones feedback.
It's nice, objectively.
If you happen to be just starting, then it's very good.
And if you'd like some critique, my first recomendation is to unify the rhythm through it.
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